Why should my Commercial be on TV?

Dear TV studio,
The reason why you should put my commercial on is because it will help people. It will help them by saving money on their delicious desserts. It will help us gain money because everyone is going to like it. #1-It is healthy, #2-It is 0 calories which is good for a person on a diet and #3-It tastes delicious. If you try it you will probably like it and hopefully you will let commercial be on TV and it might turn out to be a hit.
                              Thank you,
                                          Deshaune Melendez