Persuasive Writing: Quote Explaination

    Every single battle people force themselves to keep going. According to the Japanese, "Fall seven times, stand up eight." Everyone in the world cannot just give up every time they fail. You have to just keep trying and never give up by that no matter how many times you fall you are always up more. Many people have shown this quote.
     I know that MMA fighters get hit pretty hard and knocked down but they always get back up to try again and go for their goal. Also Musicians make mistakes on a really hard song but they just keep practicing until they get it. It is exactly like my solo, I could not play it but I started to get it when I started to practicing it. People are still giving up right away. This is effecting our entire community.
     This world is not very successful because people just quit the minute they fail. As a result people are losing their jobs, dying, and getting locked up because they are losing their jobs and going into criminal activities. At my elementary school, teachers there were quiting and giving up on their student saying that they failed. The world is not realizing this.
      If the world were to realize this situation we would be living a very successful time. As Abraham Lincoln said, " Persuade your neighbors to compromise whenever you can." People can tell their neighbors the Japenese quote. Maybe then our economy will advance, and have a very successful and prosperis life.
    

Should Schools allow kids to have cell phones?

A lot of kids at HHMS have been caught with a cell phone. Now the teachers are consfiscating them and having the the parents come and pick them up.I think HHMS should allow cell phones. If the kids will be allowed with cell phones they will be safer, they would enjoy school more and be able to text someone who is not there if there is an emergency.
    If cell phones are allowed kids will be safer. If a kid is in trouble at school with kids they can call someone like their parents. Also let kids text there parents they are on their way so they know they are on the bus. This will let the parents be worried free.
    Kids will enjoy school a lot more than usual. Kids will have fun being able to text any time they want during school. This will aslo make kids want to come to school more which will be an advatage for the princpal. Cell phones will be a good idea.
     It will also be for emergency. If a kid misses the bus the kid can call his/her parents. Also they might have gotten hurt they can tell someone to call their parent. Phones will help.
     Cell phones are a good idea. They are good for safety, emergency, and fun. Cell phones  are the best